This is the second part of the story started here: Captain Blaze. It is meant to show how the Point of View changes everything.
Emily Henson was a good woman. I could always trust her to keep me
informed when something big was going down, and from the way she sounded over
the phone, I had a feeling this was big.
"Hollow, is that you?"
she asked as he shone a flashlight around the parking deck. I could see how much she was shaking.
"You're sure you weren't
followed, Em?" I asked as I stepped into the light.
She let out a sigh of relief. "Yeah, I'm pretty sure. Listen, I can't stay long. Something big is going down." She stepped closer to me, turning the
flashlight off and plunging us both into the dim light that came form the
street. "It's this contract
we've been working on. It's
supposed to be a hydrocarbon detector, you know, for oil. But it doesn't add up, The military is interested. I know they might be able to use some
but... the other day I was digging around and found out what's in them. Hollow, it's weapons-grade plutonium. And a lot of it – far more than we'd
need to detect hydrocarbons."
I looked around. The sunglasses I wore to cover my face
weren't normal sunglasses. They
offered me a view of the world unhindered by shadows. Thankfully, I didn't see anyone hiding in the dark. "You think they're going to make
them into weapons?"
"No," she said, shaking
her head. "I found out today
that the military is shipping these overseas. But they're not going to where the oil is; they're going to
Korea. Hollow Point, I think
General Hauser is planning to sell these under the table. Selling plutonium is regulated, but
these detectors aren't. I think
they're trying to make a profit off of a weapon. They might even want to start a war with this stuff. They're shipping it tomorrow at the
docks, 115. I… I didn't know who
else to turn to."
"Don't worry. You came to the right man. I'll take care of it."
It wasn't hard taking out the
guards. I'm sure they were
expecting an attack, but they certainly weren't expecting me. Finding the cargo container wasn't
hard, either. General Hauser was
never good at subtlety. I'd donned
my newest suit, an exoskeleton filled with nifty gadgets, and it was a good thing,
too. As soon as I'd finished
cutting a hole into the side of the container, a light shone on me and I heard
a familiar, self-righteous voice.
"Hands up! Step away from the cargo."
I rolled my eyes. "Captain Blaze…" I said
between my teeth. The last thing I
needed was for hot-head to get in my way.
"Hollow Point. You're in over your head this
time. Come quietly, and maybe the
DA will go easy on you."
"Blaze, back off. You don't know what you're doing, and I
don't have time to explain. I need
to take this back to where it belongs," I said as I rushed into the
container. All I saw was a box on
a pedestal, but my suit was giving me readouts that I'd never seen before. This had to be it.
There was a deafening impact and
soon part of the roof was being torn away. Blaze's fingers reached through the holes and I felt the
container start to lift.
"Are you crazy, Blaze!?"
I called out and grabbed the box.
It heaved as my suit adjusted to its incredible weight. The pedestal shifted and began to
beep. A countdown. A short countdown.
I'd never run so fast in my life. It didn’t hurt that my suit was built
for speed. My body practically
flew out of the container, ripping my trench coat right off. "Get out of there, Blaze. This isn't about who wins!" I
called out, but I never slowed down.
There was nothing that could catch
me, at least that's what I thought.
But after I passed by a corner, something went wrong. A blockade of cars. Then another. I felt like I was being herded, forced to move down narrower
and narrower roads to keep from collided with things. When I'd finally found the room to slow down, my suit
failed.
"An EM Pulse?" I asked no
one in particular as the box fell to the ground. I collapsed under the weight of my exoskeleton. A small crowd had gathered around the
intersection I was lying in, but none of the onlookers dared to get close to
me. Then he arrived.
"Darn it, Blaze! Let me go! These things aren't what you think. They're dangerous and I can't let them
fall into the wrong hands!"
"Save it Hollow," Captain
said with that all-too-familiar look of smug justice on his face. I
watched helplessly as he picked the box up. He was talking, but I was too busy getting out of my
exoskeleton to listen.
"What's this?" he
asked. I looked up and saw the lid
had been removed and Blaze was reaching into it.
"No! Get out of there!
It's too…nngg.. dangerous!"
I managed to wiggle myself free and ran up to him. I grabbed the lid, which lay on the
ground nearby, and rammed my body against his, pushing him away from the
box. The lid slid into place, but
it was too late.
Captain Blaze was holding a small
sphere. This was no hydrocarbon
detector. My goggles flashed into
life and the exoskeleton behind me twitched. The only thing I could see through the goggles was a
radioactivity warning the like of which I'd never seen before. This wasn't even plutonium. It was much worse. The words "FATAL DOSE"
appeared before my eyes, then the goggles died again.
"Does that look like an
instrument for detecting oil to you, Blaze?" He shook his head.
"I've never seen one, but I
don't think this… it burns."
The ball fell to the ground with a
thud. "It's bad, Blaze. Whatever
this is, I think it's already killed us."
Blaze looked at me in horror. Suddenly the power turned back on in my
suit. It thrashed about for just a
moment. I walked over to it and
started put it back on, wiggling my body into it.
"What are you doing?"
Blaze asked.
"I'm going to put this thing
back in the box and bury the box where it can't hurt anyone."
He stood up and winced as he picked
the ball up and put it back in the box.
I could see that it had left his hands burnt. "I'll do it," he said. Then he flew off.
I couldn't have stopped him, the idiot. If he was taking it to the military, I wouldn't be able to
catch up to him. But instead, I
watched as he streaked brightly across the sky and splashed into the
ocean. He never came up.
Now I'm stuck here in this hospice,
dying slowly and painfully. The
doctors tell me there's nothing they can do. They try to make me comfortable. But I am captured by the thought that, even in his death,
that man was denying me. I would die in steps, as a villain.
Nice job. My only critique would be to watch out for repetitive words and phrases. Otherwise I really liked the story!
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